shadows dance across the ceiling
as the silent tv flickers
illuminating the inside of
my eyelids
I struggle
to recapture the feelings of
the recent dream
thoughts, scenes
and words from the day
wash across my mind
pulling sands of nonsense
out to sea
leaving
hope
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these last three are really good. i like where you're going with your writing lately. you seem to be pretty mixed up about things. welcome to growing up. you should call me so we can hang out soon.
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this one too
ReplyDeletethis is the best one youve written so far
i love the complexities created through simplicity and the division of words to create further disections of thought and emotion :)
I have a poet for you if i can remember her name....ill have to get back to you on this....
thank you and please do.
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